I fail to understand
Am I slow or is it too much to comprehend
Years have flown in the blink of an eye
But they still are enough to comply
I felt the surge in pain
But I chose to stay
Not aware of the repercussions
The heat of which has made me go astray
Loved I sure am
It being the only living emotion between us
But how effective is it
When I fail to understand...
Am I slow or is it too much to comprehend
Years have flown in the blink of an eye
But they still are enough to comply
I felt the surge in pain
But I chose to stay
Not aware of the repercussions
The heat of which has made me go astray
Loved I sure am
It being the only living emotion between us
But how effective is it
When I fail to understand...
4 comments:
Y'know, I always find it very hard to comment on poetry. For it is more a dialogue with ones self.
Hope you had a nice weekend.
Cheers,
SwB
Yes I agree... But it is generally how closely one can relate to that poetry... i think thats what counts... and thats what ppl respond to...
I totally relate to this...specially The first four lines
Infact it has quite a few dimensions.
Nice one Gari
exactly... it has quite a few dimensions.. and thats what i liked about this poem when i finished writing it.. It would relate to almost everyone.. whichever perspective they want to look at it in
Happy that you liked it..
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